Feedback and Revisions

My partner and I have decided to reshoot the detective scenes because the dialogue does not sound that natural. We also are going to add dialogue to those scenes to make the opening credits longer. My partner and I are also making Detective Turner a girl because we had to many difficulties with the detective costume and make-up. We are also going to make the slow motion portion shorter, move the names to the beginning of the two minutes, and get rid of the black screen at the end and put the title over the slow motion. When we reshoot the actors playing the two girls can wear different outfits that are still the same style that their characters wear to show that the interrogation is a different day as the flash backs. Also Detective Turner should wear something more professional or blue to better help show that she is a detective.